where to begin...
where did you find this one?
first a few comments on the output stage, because no matter how you get there, output stages are all very much alike.
1, why the diodes across the emitter resistors? not really necessary
2. Q10 and Q11 should have about a 100 ohm resistor between them. if you don't provide a discharge path for the capacitance Ccb of Q14 and Q15, the clipping behavior will be terrible.
3. the bias transistor Q8 would be better off with a 10uf or so cap across the C-E junction. you want a DC bias between the driver bases, but the same AC signal on the bases.
4. any particular reason for the driver stage to be composite transistors? it's not really necessary.
5. put "kickback" diodes across the C-E junctions of the output devices to protect them from inductive spikes. these would be 1N4004 diodes with the cathode towards the positive rail.
6. add a zobel network (a 10nf cap and 10 ohm resistor in series) from the output to ground, and a 25uH coil in parallel with a 10 ohm resistor between the output terminal and the load. the zobel network shunts any RF or high frequency oscillation to ground. the coil and resistor isolates any speaker capacitance from the amp and helps prevent oscillation.
comments on the VAS (Voltage Amplifier Stage)
1. why the complicated current mirror and current source setup? it will work, but a simple current source as the VAS load would be simpler, and just as effective.
Input stage:
1. why the nonlinear feedback through Q3 and the diode connected Q4? part of the reason for negative feedback is to reduce distortion. it would be better to add an emitter resistor to Q5 and apply the negative feedback at the emitter. (again, look at the design for a Dynaco)
2. although they were sucessful through the late '60s into the late '70s, single ended input stages have some problems, one (PSRR) is mentioned below as part of a more general question,. another is the tendency towards even harmonic distortion because it is a single ended circuit with no effective cancellation of the transistor's nonlinearities.
there may be more, but i'll post them as i think of them...
another question in general... why the single ended design? a lot of good amps were single ended, like the Dynaco, but they suffered from poor PSRR (Power Supply Rejection Ratio) and required EXTREME filtering of the power supply rails the development of diff amps was a huge implrovement, and also simplified the negative feedback