Placing the LEDs flush to the board without a 3mm spacer means the gold bond wire might dislocate with a hot iron used over 3 seconds.. Review the LED soldering specs. I had a client who damaged many LEDs this way. Heat travels about 1mm /s along the LED leads and once it reaches the wire bond joint any motion on the leads can break it. They should not get wounded if you can make a good solder joint in 2 seconds. (fragile) Observe the lead length minimum and maximum hand solder time at all times.
I agree the red-circled solder joints need repair. Good eye loops or a 10x eyeglass helps. A microscope cam is wonderful.
You will need to populate the Resistors depending on your supply voltage using. IF all the LEDs are 2.1V and appear to be in strings of 7, 6, 6 but there are 4 resistors So check your instructions. But I think it runs off V+= 3.3V with the resistors drawing (R3)140mA, (R4)120mA, (R4)120 mA with < 1.2V drop using 1/4W resistors rising < 70'C
My est. is use 3.3V and use R3= 12, R4 = R2 =10 ohms 1/4W and R1=1k? if it enables all dim with switch off.(?)