The lousy old LM358 is too noisy (lots of hiss) to be a mic preamp, especially since you have WAY too much gain in your system. You should use an audio opamp like a TL071 single, TL072 dual or TL074 quad opamp instead. A single TL071 opamp with a non-inverting gain of 100 can replace your first two lousy old opamps.
The first opamp has a 10k input resistance that loads down the output of the mic. The impedance of the electret mic parallel with R1 is about 2.5k ohms so the input resistance of the first opamp should be about 25k or more. It is easy if it is non-inverting instead of inverting like you have now.
R1 and R2 should be fed a filtered voltage from a series 470 ohm resistor then a 100uF capacitor to ground to prevent power supply hum and noise from being amplified.
The volume control should be fed from a coupling capacitor to block the DC which causes it to "crackle" as it is turned.
Remove C12 to reduce the gain to a reasonable amount and prevent acoustical feedback howling.