Hello again,
R8 is not only not needed it could make the LM324 act as a linear device, which you dont want here. Therefore, you need to eliminate R8 and get that part of the circuit working without that resistor.
The LM324 should be perfectly capable of putting out the required voltage without that resistor. If it doesnt work without that resistor, then something else is wrong.
Same goes for R3 and R4. Remove them and get the circuit working without them. If you cant get it working without them, then something else more serious is wrong.
Im not sure how these three resistors got into the circuit either, what made you put them there, but they should be removed.
It was also pointed out that the two comparators probably need some hysteresis. This comes from putting one resistor in series with the non inverting terminal of the op amp, then another much larger resistor from the output to the non inverting terminal. When the output goes high for example it is because the non inverting terminal went higher than the inverting terminal, so the small feedback from the output back to the non inverting terminal raises the non inverting terminal voltage a little bit more so that the comparator can not immediately turn back off as the voltage dwells near the crossover point. The positive feedback eliminates the dwell and forces it to stay in one state rather than flip back and forth.
The values would be rather high for the feedback resistor and rather low for the series resistor. For example, 1k for the series resistor and 100k for the feedback. If that turn out to not be enough, then 2k for the series resistor. If that's still not enough, then 5k, then 10k, etc.
The percent hysteresis is roughly calculated from:
Rseries/Rfeedback
So with a 1k series and 100k feedback the hysteresis is roughly 1000/100000=1/100
which is 1 percent. With 10k and 100k, it is 10000/100000=10/100
which is 10 percent, however 10 percent means that the trip point low is 10 percent lower than the trip point high so that is probably too much for this application. It really depends on the output of the sensor though so a good place to start is at 1 percent.
This is one of the more foggy areas of the design and may require some experimentation.
Another point is to put a capacitor across the sensor, at the input to the PC board for the controller.
One of the problematic things that comes up in automobile circuits is trying to eliminate noise that comes from various areas. One problem area is the ignition. The coil, drive circuit, and ignition wires cause lots of radiated noise. Dealing with that is not always easy. Troubleshooting may require a scope.
It dawned on me that you might be trying to learn electronics along with building this project. I think that is very good. I am giving you this advice with the hope that it helps get the project going as fast as possible, but you might not be in that much of a hurry if you are also trying to learn more about electronic circuits. So take your time if you wish, and i hope you can get this going ok without too much trouble. Keep in mind however that this is not the best project for a first project if that's what it is for you. Part of the complexity comes just from the fact that it is for a car, to be operated in the vehicle itself. So another idea would be to test it in the home first under more controlled conditions to make sure it works as designed, then transfer it to the car and see what happens. All that is required is a power supply and maybe a pot to simulate the sensor, and of course a load like the motor if not the motor itself.